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09 April 2012 @ 11:25 pm
I Waited For You  
Title: I Waited For You
Author: juuten
Genre: Drama
Rating: PG
Pairing: Joonmyun/Kyungsoo
Summary: They both waited. They both hoped. But love doesn't always prevail.

A/N: Based on teaser 16...writing under the influence of painkillers.




In this place of endless brown fields, I waited for you. I waited for an eternity. Why didn't you come for me?


The sun shines brightly in the sky. It does not stop shining. It can't.


The air is cold. Everything is still.


He flies his kite across the field. A gentle wind lets it soar. He doesn't stop flying his kite. He can't. He's waiting for someone...someone very special to him...


The promise of forever...we made a promise. Where are you? I want to see you. Why can't I see you?


The sun shines brightly in the sky. It does not stop shining. It can't.


The air is cold. Everything is still.


He reads his books to pass time. A gentle wind tries to distract him. He doesn't stop reading his books. He can't. He's waiting for someone...someone very precious to him...


How long has it been? How long will you keep me waiting? I'm scared. I'm sad. I miss you. I love you. I have to be with you. I'll wait for you.


Time takes its toll on him. His mind is empty. He stands there, waiting. He's been waiting for so long. Nothing changes. He stares at nothing, because there is nothing. 


I'll wait for you...I'll wait for you...I'll wait for you...


He gets up from his chair. He's broken. His thoughts are mute. He stands there, waiting. He's been waiting for so long. Nothing changes. He feels nothing, because his painful heart has become nothing.


I have no more tears to shed. My tears...I counted them. All of them...they were all for you...please don't let me wait anymore...I love you...


They walk beside a shallow pond. They cross paths. Something does not feel right. They stop. They turn around.


Is that you? Have you come for me?


They see nothing but the useless brown fields. No one is there. They can't see each other. The eclipse arrives. Time is up.


I waited an eternity. I waited for you. You never came for me. Why didn't you come for me?


Black curtains pervert the bright sky. The sun can never shine again. Two hearts shatter from a broken promise. Two souls are trapped in eternal darkness, without each other. Love is lost.


Why didn't you come for me?


In the end, like the world around them, they also turn into nothing.


Love is lost.



THE END




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pringlesninja21pringlesninja21 on April 10th, 2012 02:28 pm (UTC)
My tears TT_TT
Written very well!
eoryndal: Exo (Sehun)eoryndal on April 12th, 2012 08:42 pm (UTC)
This was amazing
This style of writing had a very soft, ethereal feel to it *-*
I love the repetitions and the parallels
and also the heartache I got from reading this